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Months ago | 11th June 2011 01:43
damn son calm down! you DID ask for what people thought about this. and you got your answer. no need to get worked up if you dont like what people thought of your work. as long as you like it, thats all that matters.
and now heres my thoughts on it - it looks pretty good but its not very original.
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Months ago | 11th June 2011 02:09
My honest opinion, it looks rushed/unfinished. On the plus side though, the choice of background color was nice, it has good contrast and compliments the other colors well. But I think that the blending of colors in the background could have been a little better. And the shadow on the right side of his face (left side of painting) could have been left out or lightened.
Some things you might wanna try/fix:
- The color of the eyebrows really distracts from the picture as a whole, so I think you should go over that in black.
- Consistency throughout the painting. On his chest, you have lines separating the shadows, but on the face you don't.
- His nose has a really awkward shape to it, maybe add some shadow or just redo that small part?
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Months ago | 11th June 2011 06:46
Good shit for a painting. I hate painting...its so hard lol
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Months ago | 13th June 2011 14:28
Your av says " say no to fakes". Well, this is just as bad and poorly executed. I understand to copy things that you like to learn and get better. However, if your going to post the final product it should be worth it. This is a bad rendition of the orginal drawing I think you and the ORGINAL artist did a poor a job on the shadows of the face as you gave him a 5 oclock shadow. And just like fakes this isn't orginal. When I read the title I was hoping for more. Can't blend with markers, oh really? Have you tried Copic markers? I would advise you to learn what you can actually do with said medium and any other medium. Just youtube the shit on how to mix with markers there are plenty of vids on it.
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Months ago | 15th June 2011 16:13
looks alright to me. good, clean work
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Months ago | 15th June 2011 16:18
I all I know is I can't hate cuz I can't paint for shit so I'd be stupid to critize
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Months ago | 20th June 2011 22:40
try adding a bit more thin layers of color to give it some depth, or you can make the colors much more solid and rich keep at it
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damn son calm down! you DID ask for what people thought about this. and you got your answer. no need to get worked up if you dont like what people thought of your work. as long as you like it, thats all that matters.
and now heres my thoughts on it - it looks pretty good but its not very original.
My honest opinion, it looks rushed/unfinished. On the plus side though, the choice of background color was nice, it has good contrast and compliments the other colors well. But I think that the blending of colors in the background could have been a little better. And the shadow on the right side of his face (left side of painting) could have been left out or lightened.
Some things you might wanna try/fix:
- The color of the eyebrows really distracts from the picture as a whole, so I think you should go over that in black.
- Consistency throughout the painting. On his chest, you have lines separating the shadows, but on the face you don't.
- His nose has a really awkward shape to it, maybe add some shadow or just redo that small part?
Good shit for a painting. I hate painting...its so hard lol
Your av says " say no to fakes". Well, this is just as bad and poorly executed. I understand to copy things that you like to learn and get better. However, if your going to post the final product it should be worth it. This is a bad rendition of the orginal drawing I think you and the ORGINAL artist did a poor a job on the shadows of the face as you gave him a 5 oclock shadow. And just like fakes this isn't orginal. When I read the title I was hoping for more. Can't blend with markers, oh really? Have you tried Copic markers? I would advise you to learn what you can actually do with said medium and any other medium. Just youtube the shit on how to mix with markers there are plenty of vids on it.
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looks alright to me. good, clean work
I all I know is I can't hate cuz I can't paint for shit so I'd be stupid to critize
try adding a bit more thin layers of color to give it some depth, or you can make the colors much more solid and rich keep at it
